Cross Country
to start with a little story...
I ran with excitement a jumped in the car because I was so excited to run,
I thought I was coming 2 but at the end, I came 2= with Rose.
I asked everyone before the race what place they think they're going to come in, I said to them I thought I was going to come second I never knew it. This was my last year at Makaraka school, Because I'm a year 6 and next year I'm going off to Gisborne intermediate You know what that's like it's going to be all the townie flat cost countries. at Brooks house is so cool we go upHills downhills. I was getting nervous and nervous more every second. I had no idea what place I was going to come but I kind of did know I was going to come 2nd no I wasn't my goal was to come In 1st 2nd or 3rd. Rose thought you're going to come last I like how you're not… but at the end of the day end of the race me and Rose come second equal and Brooke came first And O wow that was a cool race I'm so sad it's my last race at Brooks house.
I ran with excitement a jumped in the car because I was so excited to run,
I thought I was coming 2 but at the end, I came 2= with Rose.
I asked everyone before the race what place they think they're going to come in, I said to them I thought I was going to come second I never knew it. This was my last year at Makaraka school, Because I'm a year 6 and next year I'm going off to Gisborne intermediate You know what that's like it's going to be all the townie flat cost countries. at Brooks house is so cool we go upHills downhills. I was getting nervous and nervous more every second. I had no idea what place I was going to come but I kind of did know I was going to come 2nd no I wasn't my goal was to come In 1st 2nd or 3rd. Rose thought you're going to come last I like how you're not… but at the end of the day end of the race me and Rose come second equal and Brooke came first And O wow that was a cool race I'm so sad it's my last race at Brooks house.
Hi Jess I am Mehakpreet I am a year 6 from Papakura Central School
ReplyDeleteI like the way you used really interesting words and how you predicted what place you will come and ended up coming that place that really weird and cool
Next time you could tell us what you had to do for this writing like if you were recapping doing free writing or lots more
This reminded me of inter school cross country I haven't done my school cross country yet but it is coming up and I predict I will 6th or 7th
Keep up the good work
by Mehakpreet :)